Open Poetry #42 |
Je Voudrais te Donner - with translation |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
JE VOUDRAIS TE DONNER 1 January 1983 Je voudrais te donner le bonheur des amis des rires des sourires de mon amour Je voudrais te donner le bonheur des animaux fidèles des pluies d’été des ruisseaux étincelants sous le soleil des oiseaux de toutes les couleurs. Je voudrais te donner le bonheur du courage quand la vie est dure de l’espoir quand ton ciel est noir de la foi quand le courage et l’espoir t’échappent. Je voudrais te donner le bonheur d’être heureux sans moi s’il faut être sans moi. Je voudrais te donner Le Bonheur puisque tu es Mon Bonheur. I WOULD LIKE TO GIVE YOU 1 January 1983 I would like to give you the happiness of friends of laughter of smiles of my love. I would like to give you the happiness of faithful animals of summer rains of sparkling streams under the sun of bird of all colours. I would like to give you the happiness of courage when life is hard of hope when your sky is black of faith when courage and hope escape you. I would like to give you the happiness of being happy without me if you have to be without me. I would like to give you Happiness since you are My Happiness. - Owl |
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KeyLimeSorbet Member
since 2008-03-05
Posts 74Colorado |
:-) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Diana, I saved this faster than I can say "le bonheur" ~ and that is exactly what you are spreading with this joy-filled piece of writing! Love to lovely, loving you! Linda |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
And I would like to give you Blessedness as well My Dear Diana For you are the smile in my heart And the light of my joy Rich |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, now THIS is a keeper! "I would like to give you Happiness" What a wonderful thing to gift! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Je voudrais te donner le bonheur d’être heureux sans moi s’il faut être sans moi. Chère Owl, tu l'as écrit...C'est une phrase magnifique qui illumine ton poème, je pense qu'il n'y a pas de plus belle preuve d'amour que ce que tu dis là... je te remercie, tu m'as ému pour la journée. un grand bravo. yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is lovely and so "you," Diana. Ida |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
exquisite writing Diana... tres tres bon! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, KeyLimeSorbet. Thank you, Linda. I am so glad you think so. Warm, smiles and hugs. Thank you, Richy. That is so sweet. Hugs to you too. Thank you, Kacy for thinking so. Merci beaucoup, pour l’avoir si bien senti mes sentiments à cette étape. J’en suis très émue que je t’ai ému pour toute la journée. Thank you, Ida. What a beautiful compliment. Merci beaucoup, Roniece! Smiles (only allowed 5 smilies per response). - Owl |
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