Open Poetry #42 |
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it takes only seconds (haiku) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity ![]() |
![]() * * * handfuls of seconds imbued with summer sun love cure a whole grim day * * * [This message has been edited by Margherita (06-26-2008 07:53 AM).] |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, What you say is very true. Such "sunny" people are a blessing. Sometimes just a simple smile will do the trick. Love Bobby |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
That's awesome. I'm going to have to try Haiku's someday soon. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Margherita, "summer sun love", yes, it is indeed a cure-all but then again I think that anything imbued with love is a cure-all. The trouble is that we first have to know love to see it but you do both effortlessly. Love Helen |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You are a sunny person! hugs to you ![]() |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And the pendulum swings... ![]() Life can indeed change in an instant, even in a second. Inded, one of the simplest things to be remembered, yet we take it for granted that we'll always have time to make things better...if we only could. We can't wait, can we? After all, to be and do good, "takes only seconds". ![]() |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderful Margherita! Love, Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
No one writes haikus like you. They are just great and the pictures you find really add to the piece. Concgratulations! |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is so very true and I printed it out. Thank you for a bit of sun from your world to mine. Love, A |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
Excellent !! Very nice and wise. Anwaar. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
excellent write...interesting graphic as well! applause!! |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
but what happens when the sun gets too hot? LOL |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
I likeee...... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Maga Margherita, after opening your glorious post, I immediately felt guilty for my naughty thoughts when I first read the title. May your days forever brim with handfuls of sunshiny moments! ![]() Love to you my kindred sister! ![]() Linda xo |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your positive attitude is a blessing, Margharita, to yourself and everyone else. Ida |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
dear magician of words, i feel the summer with all of its allures coming into me while reading this.a gem. clever talks delay friendship! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Margherita, it's wonderful, I enjoyed very much the change of mind due to external factors...It's always good to get outside of oneself sometimes... thanks yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, what fun to come in and find this to welcome me at the top! Thank you each from my heart, your kind and loving comments fill me with joy. It is true, even sharing a warm smile can bring the same effect into a heart as does a magical summer sun love ... love is never too hot, love just gives the heart and soul the perfect glow we all long to experience and to share. (temperature is another thing, today again Rome is the hottest town in Italy ... we are melting!) Hugs and smiles to each of you. Love, Margherita ![]() ![]() |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh yes, they surely do. sweet little write woman! |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
love the imagery and such truth you speak of. Nicely done! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great Haiku Margherita, you write them well Loved it. A big hug my dear. Lindsay |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
My dear Marherita, It doesn't even take seconds for you to brighten up my day. All I have to do is think of you, and instantly, I feel joy! ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear TD, Barry, Lindsay, Richy, thank you so much for reading and commenting so lovingly! Enjoy your Sunday and make it a Sun-day! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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