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Margherita
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0 posted 2008-06-25 06:10 PM




      



*  *  *


handfuls of seconds

imbued with summer sun love

cure a whole grim day



*  *  *

[This message has been edited by Margherita (06-26-2008 07:53 AM).]

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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-06-25 07:22 PM


Yo dear Margherita,

What you say is very true.  Such "sunny" people are a blessing.  Sometimes just a simple smile will do the trick.

Love Bobby

XGarapanX
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2 posted 2008-06-25 07:27 PM


That's awesome. I'm going to have to try Haiku's someday soon.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Honeybunch
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3 posted 2008-06-26 03:03 AM


Dear Margherita, "summer sun love", yes, it is indeed a cure-all but then again I think that anything imbued with love is a cure-all.  The trouble is that we first have to know love to see it but you do both effortlessly.

Love
Helen

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4 posted 2008-06-26 11:19 AM


You are a sunny person!

hugs to you

Sunshine
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5 posted 2008-06-26 11:54 AM


And the pendulum swings...



Life can indeed change in an instant, even in a second. Inded, one of the simplest things to be remembered, yet we take it for granted that we'll always have time to make things better...if we only could.

We can't wait, can we? After all, to be and do good, "takes only seconds".




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6 posted 2008-06-26 03:33 PM


Wonderful Margherita!

Love,
Eric

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2008-06-27 02:22 AM


Enjoyed...James
Misty Lilacs
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8 posted 2008-06-27 08:55 AM


No one writes haikus like you. They are just great and the pictures you find really add to the piece. Concgratulations!
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9 posted 2008-06-27 11:09 AM


This is so very true and I printed it out.  Thank you for a bit of sun from your world to mine.

Love,
A

anwaarhassan
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10 posted 2008-06-27 04:45 PM


Excellent !! Very nice and wise.

Anwaar.

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11 posted 2008-06-27 05:21 PM


excellent write...interesting graphic as well!

applause!!

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12 posted 2008-06-27 11:03 PM


but what happens when the sun gets too hot? LOL
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13 posted 2008-06-27 11:46 PM


I likeee......
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14 posted 2008-06-28 12:01 PM


Maga Margherita, after opening your glorious post, I immediately felt guilty for my naughty thoughts when I first read the title.

May your days forever brim with handfuls of sunshiny moments!

Love to you my kindred sister!


Linda xo

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15 posted 2008-06-28 01:57 AM


Your positive attitude is a blessing, Margharita, to yourself and everyone else.
                               Ida

poddarku
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16 posted 2008-06-28 02:17 AM


dear magician of words,
i feel the summer with all of its allures coming into me while reading this.a gem.

clever talks delay friendship!

2islander2
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17 posted 2008-06-28 07:04 AM


hello Margherita, it's wonderful, I enjoyed very much the change of mind due to external factors...It's always good to get outside of oneself sometimes...

  thanks

   yann

Margherita
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18 posted 2008-06-28 07:16 AM


Oh, what fun to come in and find this to welcome me at the top! Thank you each from my heart, your kind and loving comments fill me with joy.

It is true, even sharing a warm smile can bring the same effect into a heart as does a magical summer sun love ... love is never too hot, love just gives the heart and soul the perfect glow we all long to experience and to share. (temperature is another thing, today again Rome is the hottest town in Italy ... we are melting!)

Hugs and smiles to each of you.
Love,
Margherita

ThisDiamond
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19 posted 2008-06-28 08:45 AM


Oh yes, they surely do.
sweet little write woman!

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20 posted 2008-06-28 04:08 PM


love the imagery and such truth you speak of.  Nicely done!
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21 posted 2008-06-28 11:18 PM



Great Haiku Margherita, you write them well

Loved it. A big hug my dear.

Lindsay

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22 posted 2008-06-29 03:25 AM



My dear Marherita,

It doesn't even take seconds for you to brighten up my day. All I have to do is think of you, and instantly, I feel joy!


Margherita
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23 posted 2008-06-29 05:24 AM


Dear TD, Barry, Lindsay, Richy, thank you so much for reading and commenting so lovingly!

Enjoy your Sunday and make it a Sun-day!

Love,
Margherita


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