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Maybe Someday... |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan 
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Maybe someday, I'll find the time to just lay back in some fresh, green grass, relishing the clouds as they float on by Maybe that day, under a familiar oak tree, somebody will lay with me in a beautiful silence, relishing the company that is nature and me Maybe that day will come real soon And maybe that somebody is you JNS "I celebrate myself, and sing myself, And what I assume you shall assume, For every atom belonging to me as good belongs to you."-WW [This message has been edited by The Shadow in Blue (06-28-2008 06:06 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
simply EXCELLENT! p.s.: great choice of "P.I.P.-land" UserName too! applause for this 'penning!' |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ah, yes! Languishing side by side on soft green grass and gazing up at the clouds in companionable silence. Sighing here. Lovely poem. Loved the coquetish closing!  May love in all its glorious forms be your constant companion in life!   EA |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Beautiful  |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
James-I'm glad you enjoyed my slightly simple delight. secondhanddreampoet- Thanks for reading my dreamy write up. I appreciate your kudos. Yay for the randomness! Thanks for the username compliment. I mainly choose it because, much like a lot of my generation, we aren't completely ourselves, especially as teenagers (hence "The Shadow"). Plus, my favorite color is blue (hence"in Blue") -Sorry for the name dissertation.  Linda- As alway, EA, you know how to make your felllow poets smile. I'm glad you relished the poem as much as I relished it when I wrote it. Thanks a bunch.  TinaTrivett- I'm glad you saw the beauty in my coquet-ish poem. ^_^ JNS |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Jill-There are very few poems that just plain stop me in my tracks... welcome to a very exclusivce club. This is going right to the library. What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?. |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Ringo-I'm honored by your praise of my poem. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the read. ~Jill Sidenote: I'm finally taking a poetry course come Spring Semester. It should be fun. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hello lovely Jill this poem of yours is beautiful and a pleasure to read... love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
RDB- It was a pleasure to write. I'm glad my poem has touched the pipTalk community. Thanks for the read Roniece. ~J |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Maybe someday keeping the heart open someday will come wispy and sweet flow of thoughts here |
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i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines |
lovely. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Wonderful, Jill. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A delightful write. May you be able to transform the "maybe" into certainty and the "someday" into TODAY. Life is now. Love, Margherita |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
A beautiful sentiment, well written Regards OLIAS. |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Too True Margherita. As always your advice is sound. Glad you enjoyed my poetic epiphany. Alison,as always, thanks for your reply. You pretty much rock. I_am_Patch,I'm glad that you found some joy in my poem, as wishy washy as it may seem. Inked Goddess, I appreciate your reply and am glad my poem elicited such a response. Good advice,FYI. OLIAS, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for your kind response. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Wonderful reading material. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
To quote the honorabe Judge (Stewie) Griffin,"Victory is mine!"  Anyway, Thanks for your comment Garapan. I appreciate it. all chuckles aside, Jill |
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