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Especially My Honey
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Especially My Honey |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Especially My Honey My honey is as luscious as dark chocolate as mouth watering as cherrys as sweet as blueberries crunchy like walnuts soft as chiffon and yummy like pecans When I hug and kiss her she soothes and comforts me as an angel sans wings desiring earthly things. In the evening in our warm bed she's as sweet as gingerbread as I melt into her embrace loving her smiling face sharing sensual moments time can never erase that why I thank God for creating women, especially my honey. JamesLee 24June 2008 |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
She certainly sounds sweet James, make sure you look after her. enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, James, this is lovely, but what really touches me is your gratitude, your awareness of the precious gift. Thank you for that! Love, Margherita  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Lindsay and Margherita for the wonderful responses...James |
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ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA |
This is a great poem. I would have never thought anything like it. It opened my eyes to something different -Jess |
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FastForward Member
since 2008-06-29
Posts 66 |
Delicious! You must have a happy heart. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you I LOve the Rain and Fast Forward for the nice responses. My honey always says how happy I am when I'm with her...James |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Awe - I hope you read this to her! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
absolutly delicious, the first stanza made me hungry... that why I thank God for creating women, especially my honey. this is a thought I share. thanks yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank ou graeshine and 2islander2 for the wonderful responses... I sent this to my honey in a card last Friday, she'll be getting it soon...James |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Your honey sounds tasty and now I'm hungry. Gotta go to the store now. Maybe there's more honey there. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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