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straight edges |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
straight edges in clouds of curve simple beans in angling waves of grain winds of change blow like sliders at the game moving, evading, rationalizing their pain as the sight slips slyly past the eye longing for, begging for, yearning with the passion of desire ablaze always recognizing, never knowing I need a shave that lasts for more than a day |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
I'm at work and busted out laughing! nice one. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Yes, funny AND very clever writing. A minor masterpiece here. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Heck, every line could stand alone here. Truth is, I hated to see it end so soon. Loved your thoughts, excellent poem, steavenr~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is a very captivating write, dear Steaven! Love, Margherita  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Interesting, funny write. Ida |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
To the max! Enjoyed!! |
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