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Evening Breeze
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Evening Breeze |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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The evening breeze strokes my hair, it carries an old familiar scent from somewhere much too long ago, the glorious days of youth I spent honeysuckle-picking and licking, trying to outrun the bees, yes, it's been much too long since I've felt...that evening breeze. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, Dixie, so good that you are able to perceive this sweetness and to tell us in such a beautiful way. This will linger in my mind and it will have the same effect on me as it had on you ... Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a fine 'slice of the past' write! applause!! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Passing shadows, This is very good writing. Those were probably my bees, I kept ten hives in your area. I like your new picture. Love Bobby |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
What a way to bring back time. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful reminiscing Love the new pic Hope |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Dixie, I loved this - but even more, I loved the fact that you are happy in this poem and in the moment. - Owl |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello PS it seems to me you are still young writing this poem requires youth. Thanks to you yann |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
Very nicely said. Reminds me of the passage of time and how precious and nostalgic memories can be. Well said !! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Brings back lovely memories for me too, Dixie. Very enjoyable. Ida |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Wonderful gifting Dixie.. wonderful you! love RDB xx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Now this is spectacular!  |
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