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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto 
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Words yet spoken Already known Feelings thoughts Love has shown Needing no words Spoken out Silence gestures Leave no doubt Love’s own calling Soft and true Walls come falling Revealing you….. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Copyright 2008 Victor Duna all rights reserved. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like the last stanza especially |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Really liking your poetry. I love it when a little says alot. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
actions speak louder than words... I like it when the walls come tumbling down..  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
nice awww-inducing last two lines  |
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FastForward Member
since 2008-06-29
Posts 66 |
"Revealing You" This is very cool. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I like Boston and Moody Blues as well... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
love this! Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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