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TinaTrivett
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0 posted 2008-06-22 08:21 PM


Poem I made up after seeing this painting by Rick Mobbs

    

Krishna kissed the sun today
A fiery embrace in watercolor haze
His skin held stars and blue skies
Lovers held each other until dark
Dragon smoke will lure the child
Wearing her magical garments



If anyone else wants to write one about the painting too...feel free. I'll send the link to Rick when we're through. I know he'll enjoy it.

© Copyright 2008 Tina Trivett - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2008-06-22 09:15 PM


Interesting interpretation of the painting.  I followed your link into unknow spaces.  Thank you.  Joyce
Alison
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2 posted 2008-06-23 02:29 AM


I can't see the picture but I love the poem by itself.  I'll check back to see the picture later.

You are a beautiful poet, Ma'am Tina Trivett.

A

2islander2
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3 posted 2008-06-23 05:08 AM


Very Beautiful Tina...

   yann

TinaTrivett
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4 posted 2008-06-23 11:09 AM


Thanks all   Joyce, if you meander around that link you will find many good blogs..  

Alison, if you right click on the painting & click 'show picture' it should show.

Margherita
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5 posted 2008-06-23 06:51 PM


Very lovely interpretation of an inspiring picture.

Enjoyed this much, dear Tina.

Love,
Margherita

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6 posted 2008-06-25 08:16 PM


Well, this is sucky. I can't see the picture either. But the poem rocks.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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