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Open Poetry #42
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Pluto
0 posted 2008-06-22 04:44 PM


Glass of shattered
Still hanging on
Broken frames
Stranded upon
Empty walls
Silence shatters
Vacant halls
All that matters
Since departed
Forever gone


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graeshine2006
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1 posted 2008-06-22 08:54 PM

That was powerful.  I don't know the exact feeling you are having and what all brought on this poem, but I can certainly empathize with parts of it.  
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2 posted 2008-06-22 09:17 PM

Your poem brings all kinds of images to mind.  Very moving.  Joyce
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