»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #42
»
Defiance
| Open Poetry #42 |
|
Defiance |
|
|
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
|
. All those mosquitoes On my window screen Bloodthirsty little buggers Wanting to get in Sorry you pricks Of a possible mortal wound Someday you may be welcome But not too soon . |
||
| © Copyright 2008 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, John, what a powerful impact your words have! Those armies of little killers are ruining my summer! No sweet nightly hours of reading on the balcony anymore ... they break through whatever "firewall" I try to stay in peace. It's frightening that these small beings are one of the greatest threats we have to endure ... Love, Margherita  |
||
|
XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Loved this clever little ditty! Serious! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
||
|
RC Langill Member
since 2008-03-09
Posts 104 |
quote: Stated with admirable harshness. In the US, mosquitoes are frequently viewed as a nasty unpleasantness, but in large parts of the world, it really is mortal combat. Thanks for putting this all in words so easy to hear. |
||
|
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello I think the mosquitoes are the useless animals of the creation....They cause millions of deaths in a year although sharks cause 3 or 4 deaths in a year...I hate this bug. |
||
|
gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Master of profound understatement, you are! Art |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
