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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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this is pizza and those are orchids seems easy enough to find the fit in ovens or windows depending on the chill outside and from this high in my mind when the years are taller then trees looking down there is no difference and the smells seem to be melding like the news print on wonderful when you wrinkle it slowly at first then into a ball of oblivion toffee that you hide under your pillow hoping cinderella will grant you wishes but she is not really a fairy just a woman with new skin and more urges than you have dreams with a v-8 in her truckless want to _____________________ daark scribblenote: one of those replays of negotiations to improve the visuals of surrounding forests and wetlands.....anything sexually applied is cool and carries no extra charge. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
enjoyed the scribblenote~~  M |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
when it comes to mother nature the libido just lends itself to her naturally ,anyhow deep caves open skies and the many bushes between pass me your pepporoni for my pizza enjoyed the taste of this all |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I can say this... This is the second piece I've come across produced by your pen and I am still amazed at your skill and poetic orientation. Definitely going to be studying your poetry to see how I might better my own work. Great writing here. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Oh yeah, and your picture is really scary. |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Been awhile but enjoyed this scribble as well. So well put.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have an incredible creative force flowing through your pen, POET! Love, Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
loved your offering Mr Daark... and the sexual connotation worked for me love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I like your first verse the best. Something about the chill (I can feel it) when it's over a 100 degrees outside. I don't do sweat unless I've got good reason. Stay cool, Mr. Mosey~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
awwwww bluecrew you guys blow me away, I do so much appreciate each of you. glad my picture is still scary, you ought to see the real me..that would make your mirrors turn to jelly. |
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