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Open Poetry #42

Haze with powers

cauchy3
Member

since 2008-06-10

Posts 61

0 posted 2008-06-18 10:37 PM

Haze with powers¡K.
Mirror looks are men with chests.
Freshet waters come as fresh.
Moneys fresh are banks with days.
Haze with powers gets the mass.

Mirror men are highly chained.
Mirrors also all are aimed.
Haze with powers kills a man.
Funs with nickels get my charms.

Nickel silvers stacked in heaps.
Haze with powers runs on earths.
Blaze our worlds a mark with notes.
Square in deals are under soles.

Cauchy3 has soles lead to games.
Kick my bills as all are bare.
Bear it over under ways.
Bear it powers under marched.
-----------Cheung Shun Sang=Cauchy3-----------

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-06-18 11:55 PM

Yo Cauchy3,

I'm afraid I can't quite catch the drift of this piece.

I'd advise reading more of the poetry posted here. Some of it is pretty good. You may learn something.

Bobby

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