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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto 
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Mystical premise What shall come Releasing the past What has been done Edge of a miracle Swirls of hope Alive empirical Eternal awoke... copyright 2008 vic duna |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Love your thoughts here. Love, Margherita |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Definitely short, sweet, and to the very point of the matter. Interesting write. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I like the mystical positivity in your poem. "Releasing the past" "Edge of a miracle" "Swirls of hope" "Alive empirical" "Eternal awoke."  EA  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I agree with Linda, Victor. I love the positive attitude of this beautiful, mystical poem, It says so much with so few words. Ida |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
thank you for reading! |
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