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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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Places Yesterday . . . was it way back then or just before last night – maybe, moments ago. Too soon, too far, too late, to tell – pray for me, that I might survive it’s wrath. © wesley james beard, jr. june 2008 ....not about me. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I almost missed this one, Jimmy, and it is very good. I glad it's not about you. Ida |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Jimmy, I really like how you look beyond yourself when you write poetry. This is good and I, too, am glad that it is not about you. Alison |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Heck if I know! We space cadets have no concept of time!  Seriously speaking, it is horrible to be in such a state of fear and discombobulation as is the person for whom this was written. Here's a hug for each of you!  Linda |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Jimmy...Enjoyed. Great write. Your poem finds me in about the same place as the person you write about. Another storm to survive. Thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this hits hard in the soft spot that makes us all human |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This hurts, for you wrote it with such intensity. Love, Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful Jimbo... just wonderful! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This reminds me of the Beatles lyrics "There are places I remember all my life" I know I know, I'm always singing a song. This was coming from all directions and I liked it, I guess because life is like that sometimes. Hugs, you~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a poignant read of the lasting effects of scars. nicely done |
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