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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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0 posted 2008-02-09 11:26 AM

I don't stop anymore to see where I am.
I don't look around for where I should be.
I just keep on going on and on
and I'll end up there eventually.

I've never found it good to over-analyze
certain situations, but just cast care
into the faith of a higher power
that I've always believed is there somewhere.

Fate is a peculiar vehicle,
an oddity of pre-determination-
no matter what you seem to do
in the name of pre-meditation

it's a done deal-

so I don't stop and look anymore
or question what this life is for.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-02-09 03:02 PM

Love your reflections, dear Dixie. I am sure that it is not good when we over-analyze our situations, but I believe we do have a way of influencing positively our lives with our attitude and that's what you do ...

This is also very profound.

big hugs
Margherita

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-02-10 02:11 AM

I just keep on going on and on
and I'll end up there eventually.~

Loved this Dixie, hehe I know exactly the feeling of your poem

Krysti

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2008-02-10 02:38 AM

Thought provoking write, Dixie. Sounds like you know something about life.
Ida

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2008-02-10 05:12 PM

Nice writing...I've noticed that no matter how hard I try to inject myself into a situation or a relationship, sometimes the doors are closed tight and so I back off, and sometimes the doors peek open a bit at a later time...James

Bobby Jordan
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since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2008-02-10 05:40 PM

Passing shadows,

This is very well done.

However, I just don't believe in "fate".

Bobby

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2008-02-10 07:49 PM

Very well written, Dixie, my friend. I often find myself asking, what this life is for.

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

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Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-02-10 09:36 PM

Very Well Written Indeed Dixie!

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2008-02-12 10:01 PM

"Fate is a peculiar vehicle"

well said Dixie
I love the way you write

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2008-02-13 02:51 AM

Dixie,

I, too, love the way you write
& I am often inspired by your poetry.

A

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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10 posted 2008-02-13 10:13 AM

thanks for the replies!

I love them each!

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