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cauchy3
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0 posted 2008-06-18 06:26 AM



                    Before poem 2 version-the politics of thinking-my book.

Presume are powers gaining senses.
A volume pressures are trends with weights.
Your shows are bigger flushes enlarged.
A kiss to fingers gets to faces.

A settle high are good as scenes.
Anew contracts do on dots.¡¦
A creek is drinks as stomach free.
As bricks and fangs are men and dogs.

Are elbows rooms has tension bows.
Rethinking actions save all solo.
Advices are agents paired in souls.
In teas then a cup of teas are drools.

Devices are leads of bureau tales.
Ah leaders sacred as cows with tails.
Oh opened in stakes are loans in worlds.
Protect the flames are fires of Demo-crate.
  
All morals sing a song with notes.
A closing price is lonely shoes.
A patching man is stirred in home.
On bars jumpers go to fathoms.

With falcons fall on phoenix skies,
And tigers sit on lousy keys.
In bush on pilots get a flight.
On Fights for honeys go to lights,

Will take the flushes as trades in worlds?
An odd in long is odd for shorts.
A toyed as foes are sharing honors.
Are bites to baits are those on how.

In swimming wasps are hunting lips.
A trick on sea is monkeys¡¦ laps.
Amounts reflected as total likes.
A night is fall when all are names.

Protect the rights and take my less.
Should rulers rule the very shores?
As major peoples pooled on fringes.
In macro there are micro zoomed.

America belles are good to catch.
Decreased all down are china jinx.
Control and trimmed our human arms.
A nice in action took the winds.

Would china set up very knolls?
A great in walls are nearer temples.
As moons are places with beams in long.
A great to soldiers good are nests.

A cup with witches is corpses with bloods.
A bull has red to clothes to butt.
When jailers board to jails with foods,
Be on throne as your smiles to fools.

All lees will down on singers robes.
A cover on spades is red in hands.
Pretend to preparing all in ounces.
A china lever boosts his ends.

In making offices spread the forces.
In seeming all demand to bow.
Effected objects are laying causes.
AS clauses are powers got as grosses,

----------Cheung Shun Sang=Cauchy3---------








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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-06-19 12:01 PM


Cauchy3,

I’m sure this makes sense in Mandarin Chinese.  However, in English it isn’t at all clear.

Try harder.

Bobby

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