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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-02-09 09:18 AM

there will always be the rincon water
that made me crave more indigo
than the sun could wring
from any proper patronizing

and your eyes sometimes
when your gypsy is out jogging
and you are using the tubes again
to make smooth sign languages

you knew be better then than now
but that was just a moment ago
before you were above my wanting
with your gloves on pause

the hesitation of you is lovely
like a sip when one is thirsty
and we both know of the rivers
that are just around the corner

of someone's secret highway 101

____________

daark

scribblenote...a place down the road from moseytown

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

1 posted 2008-02-09 11:28 AM

Very deep & emotive, I read it 3 times and love it, thanks for sharing.....

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2008-02-09 11:30 AM

effj' thank you for the read

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

3 posted 2008-02-09 12:50 PM

so....she's a surfer?

oh, noooooo.....

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2008-02-09 02:40 PM

Sounds enticing
would love to see it

You words read like water

A

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2008-02-09 03:06 PM

This is as cool a write
as a long winding road
that holds a secret pool
of water...on the secret
side of 101

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2008-02-09 03:24 PM

Whatever place it is, you wrap it in magic with your words, full of irresistible charm and emotion.

love
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2008-02-09 03:32 PM

ms kahlil...she is a place where the surfers do hang out yes..thanks ms

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ms ali-san, I do hope you are thirsty too, thanks babe

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ms sun, you recognize the location I see, thanks lady friend.

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ms mar, thank you for looking through the windows of this one

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

8 posted 2008-02-09 03:56 PM

That deep-drink road
curved,
with salt-water footprints
tattooed upon his mind

The fog of desire
lingers,
when a southern hand
with a young man’s pen

scribbles indigo notes
in the sand.

Enjoyed this, D. It made me smile...

Indigo

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2008-02-09 03:58 PM

ms indi...always a pleasure to cause you a smile, thank you for looking in..has been awhile.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

10 posted 2008-02-10 10:14 PM

smooth as silk stranger darlin'
new gloves bring you inspiration
and passion

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2008-02-11 06:08 AM

ladyone...glovely comment..thanks babe

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