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poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
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0 posted 2008-06-17 08:59 AM



To the quake victims
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The tail of the red toy truck can be seen.
If there is any pair of innocent hands
to play with the toy, there is no mind.
Or body.
He holds her quite and tightly. The debris
lies before them where a little body
is still confined. May be, still alive. Oh!
He knows now, how hard it is to lose hope.

clever talks delay friendship!

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
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1 posted 2008-06-17 10:36 AM


Dear Ku, this hurts, you packed the horror of such events in a few very impressive lines. An image and a feeling that will remain in the reader's mind for long ...

Love,
Margherita

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