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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
The world is a brass band, some people did not learn to read notes, Some play their own partition, the others have no instruments, it is for these reasons that the music is not pretty. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If we all played in tune, our world would be one of perfect pitch and harmony!  I always enjoy reading your thoughts! They give pause for pondering! Warm hug and a smile, Linda  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I enjoyed this, Yann. If it was all in tune, it may not be as interesting as it is. Rimsky-Korsakov's music is sometimes discordant, but discordant music can be beautiful in its own way, even if it is not pretty. - But yes, I hear what you are saying and I agree with you and Linda. I was just putting forward another opinion. - Owl |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Yann, interesting write, loved reading it. Prasad |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Linda, yes I would like to have more harmony about a lot of problems of this planet, even within people... Thanks for commenting yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Owl, you make always unexpected comments, You displaced the point of view with an interesting and sutle way, that's great...I agree with you... have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Prasad for your nice comment. yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks, Yann, but that doesn't take away from your poem. Harmony is something to be sought after, and believe me, I love harmony - both literally and metaphorically. - Owl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love your musical interpretation of the world, dear Yann! Yes, we all must take these lessons of attunement, so that we may evolve ... Love, Margherita  |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Discordant. Yes. Variables overtake a symphony and the harmony becomes an exquisite wreckage which only enhance the collective human experience. Ruin, like pain, is art waiting to be played for the audience. I like this expressive piece. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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