navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #42 » Addiction
Open Poetry #42
Post A Reply Post New Topic Addiction Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Richy
Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050


0 posted 2008-06-15 03:05 PM




I never really did care much for puzzles

Trying to fit odd shaped bits and pieces together
To make,
a picture
how fun is that, not

There’s always that piece or two
You can’t find

Or the one that's, almost right
That you try to cram into the space
Because you’re too lazy to find the
Right one

(Hey, kind of like life)

Or the one the cat played with like a mouse
And kept chewing on and now it has cat spit
All over it
Yechh!

I’m here to tell you
It’s quite the ordeal!

I would rather write,
Instead

I just love trying to fit different kinds of words together

So many funny little letters
So many, different combinations
So many, various thoughts
Just waiting,
to be born
To be articulated

To make, hmmm

A picture?

Oh?!
I guess that’s the biggest puzzle
Of all isn’t it
Snap!

Never mind


I don’t feel right if I don’t write
It’s just a part of who I am I guess
And in fact, whether or not I’m any
Good at it, it’s a pretty darn big part
Of who I am

I get up every morning five days a week
And my time belongs to my job
But even when I’m there
My heart belongs
to my heart’s desire

There’s always this damn little voice in my head
Telling me, go write that, go write, that
Go write that, you slack eyed and silly fool!

For the most part, it feels like it’s beyond
My control
It’s beyond my power
And I just can’t stop it
(I know, too bad for you guys huh)

Maybe it’s a part of immortality
To live on
To leave something behind
So we don’t vanish completely
From the earth
Taking a fleeting thought
And transforming it somehow,
Making it, a piece of life
Turning it into even a small part
Of someone’s psyche

And like the ripples from a drop
In the ocean

A tiny portion,
Of the human spirit

To just take someone’s mind
Off their troubles
If for even a brief moment
And maybe, just maybe
Give them a laugh
A tear
A smile
Or,
A small sliver,
Of hope

Well than
That’s a good thing
Write?

Words weaved together
Into coherent thoughts
Have a life of their own

They breathe
They reach out
They comfort
They give
They hold our hands
They inspire

We foolishly think that we control
How our writing will make others feel
But we don’t

And that’s the fun part

Every reader finds a
Different meaning
A different nuance
That they pull out of it

And so most of the time
We don’t really even know
What we’re writing, exactly

We are basically creating reasons
For people to think
And, to feel

Changing lives in small ways
One word at a time

People often say, "I write for myself."
Really?
Than why are you posting your writing
in public forum for the entire world to see?
Interesting.

We're here to share, to connect,
And to be, relevant.

The Passion In Poetry,
is worse, than crack



My name is Writer,
And I am a Wordaholic

And I just can’t say no

It’s a blessing
And it’s a curse

It’s just part of
My strife

Yes,
I’m an addict
And that’s okay


I’m addicted,

To life

Freedom of expression is our, write.

© Copyright 2008 Richy - All Rights Reserved
Rick
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
1 posted 2008-06-15 03:42 PM


Hi Richy, great to read your wisdom my friend, you are so right in so many ways here, it is a blessing and a curse, often when we are at our lowest we write our best, I don't really like that, but then I love what I have created. Writing is such a God sent thing, we don't realise how lucky we are to have it on our side. So enjoy your addiction my friend, write on and enjoy each moment and word as it appears. I have enjoyed your sharing here. Bye for now, and take care.

Rick

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-06-15 03:52 PM


SAVED faster than you and I can say "ADDICTION"!

...Done! Now that that is out of the way, may I say that I'm addicted to writing ~ and to reading what YOU write! Rich, this was RICH! I do so know what you mean! ~ and you said it perfectly , Sir Poet!

I was compelled to continue reading (and nodding) all the way to the end of your post ~ which came too soon for my liking!

Love & Poet Light,
Linda

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2008-06-17 03:23 AM


Addicted ... to life!
Now, that was some conclusion, dear Richie!! Just wonderfully intense. We are blessed by your passion for writing!

Love,
Margherita

graeshine2006
Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368
The Prairie Lands, USA
4 posted 2008-06-17 06:38 AM


To just take someone’s mind
Off their troubles
If for even a brief moment
And maybe, just maybe
Give them a laugh
A tear
A smile
Or,
A small sliver,
Of hope

Well than
That’s a good thing
Write?

Wow - you took the words write out of my mouth!  

Very glad you write, this nicely said so much of what I think about writing.

A most excellent job!
deb


HopeS
Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
5 posted 2008-06-17 07:54 AM


A healthy addiction so wonderfully expressed , hey Richy I feel the same as you

Hope

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
6 posted 2008-06-17 08:25 AM


I didn't ever think I would ever say these words to anyone, but "Keep up your addiction!"  We're addicted to reading you!

- Owl

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #42 » Addiction

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary