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Open Poetry #42
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-06-12 07:56 PM

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A curve of clouds
In a pale blue sky

A fleecy net
Fishing for God

Or a word or two
As they pass by


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1 posted 2008-06-12 09:02 PM

fine sky-turned impression!

applause!!
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2 posted 2008-06-13 02:45 AM

Beautiful.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-06-13 07:49 AM

I like reading you John .. your words always manage to smile me... thank you love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
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