Toerag and Balladeer get Mugged

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Tim
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since 1999-06-08

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0 posted 2008-06-07 10:05 AM

Balladeer and Toerag, were walking down the street,
When to their misfortune, a mugger they did meet,
The robber had a great big gun, he growled with gnarly sneer,
“Hand me all your money, or you won't be leaving here,”
With pointed the gun the bandit added, “don't do anything rash,
Just reach into your pockets, and pull out all your cash.”
'Deer pulled out his wallet, a twenty's all he had,
Then he turned to Toerag, saying, “I've been feeling bad,
About that night in Vegas, when I was short of dough,
Handing Toe the twenty, said "Here's the money that I owe."

RedNail
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since 2008-02-29

Posts 65
Stockholm, Sweden

1 posted 2008-06-07 10:55 AM

The rythm in this poem is so clear.
Good work Tim.
Intresting theme too.. hm.. I think you just gave me some ideas.
I think I'll check some of your other works.

Life is a rollercoster, live for the ride.

graeshine2006
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since 2008-06-03

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The Prairie Lands, USA

2 posted 2008-06-07 11:58 AM

hahahahahahahahaha.....

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2008-06-07 01:10 PM

That Balladeer has more between his horns than I had previously given him credit for!

Smart deer for passing the 'buck' which he would have lost anyway! lol

Good one, Tim!

Loves 'n laughs,
Linda

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2008-06-08 08:15 PM

Very funny. Enjoyed this Tim
Ida

The Shadow in Blue
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5 posted 2008-06-08 08:48 PM

And that is the brilliance that is Balladeer. Quite an enjoyable write Tim.

~Jill

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And what I assume you shall assume,
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garysgirl

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6 posted 2008-06-08 09:06 PM

Tim, very musing. I enjoyed reading. LOL
Keep writing!
Hugs,
Ethel
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Idontmindyouundermyskin
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since 2007-01-29

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7 posted 2008-06-09 01:39 AM

Lol
Wow that's classic.

I really love comic poems.
Please keep writing.

Great rhythm by the way.
Really flowed well.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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8 posted 2008-06-09 10:47 PM

Yep, ole Toerag is not the sharpest pencil in the box, is he?

thanks for letting people know, Tim

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

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Ala bam a

9 posted 2008-06-13 07:55 AM

Actually, it's Balladeer that's not the sharpest cheese on the cracker...the mugger was a friend of mine...I not only got the 20 he owed me, but got the other cash he was carrying....Tim and I are gona go get some wimmin and some wine....

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