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Ray Sharpe
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0 posted 2008-06-11 02:24 AM


To my new found friends on Pip......
Tomorrow

When all feels lost..When the dark surrounds
Don’t look down into the ground

Lift your gaze to the clear blue skies
Look the world straight in   the eyes

Between the gloom and fraught filled days
Perceive the love that light purveys

Feel the heat that friendship brings
It’s open heart heals broken wings

And when you find time’s hurtful sorrow
Remember child……there’ll be tomorrow

© Copyright 2008 Ray Sharpe - All Rights Reserved
2islander2
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by the sea
1 posted 2008-06-11 02:26 AM


Thank you Ray, very precious advice, very nice writing.

   have a nice day

    yann

OwlSA
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2 posted 2008-06-11 02:28 AM


Yes, Ray.  I agree with Yann - good advice.  Thanks for dedicating it to us all at Pip.  It is much appreciated.

- Owl

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
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Bangalore,India
3 posted 2008-06-11 04:23 AM


Hi Ray, good to read positive thoughts been written. Nice write. Prasad

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

K-K
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Indiana
4 posted 2008-06-11 10:09 AM


Very nice. Although I get through today before looking to tomorrow. Thanks for sharing!!!!
Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2008-06-11 06:37 PM


A beautiful thought.
Welcome to Pips!

graeshine2006
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since 2008-06-03
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The Prairie Lands, USA
6 posted 2008-06-11 10:56 PM


Thanks Ray.  I think I might read this again tomorrow, and the next tomorrow, and the next tomorrow....
graeshine2006
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7 posted 2008-06-11 10:56 PM


On 2nd thought - maybe I'll just memorize it!  
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