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Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06
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0 posted 2008-06-09 01:53 PM


The clouds are full of symbols
And for this spiritual eye
Seeking space for the wandering
It may at first appear impossible
To discern the diverse journey
That I suppose leads to an answer

I could set out in contrary directions
And transverse in numberless points
Hoping to greet success at journey’s end

And in my Mortal Mind
I am easily led along this or that path
And, like a child, left thinking
Did I dispute a wiser whisper?
Did I miss a true sign?
Until I waver

The clouds are gone
The sky is blue
As my eyes
Are empty



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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2008-06-09 02:11 PM


Hello there, fellow cloud-gazer!

"The clouds are gone
The sky is blue
As my eyes
Are empty"

~ but your mind's eye is rife with spiritual symbols!

Fluffy cloud hug,
Linda

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2008-06-09 03:54 PM


Somehow, I believe you are too astute
to miss eyeing anything unique and symbolic

so you couldn't have missed any signs!


Robert Frazier
Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014

3 posted 2008-06-09 04:28 PM


Karilea & Linda,

You two are cloudy symbols
I see clearly!
:-)

Hugs,
Robert

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2008-06-10 03:05 AM


so very beautiful Robert!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
5 posted 2008-06-11 12:15 PM


I am easily led along this or that path
And, like a child, left thinking
Did I dispute a wiser whisper?
Did I miss a true sign?
Until I waver


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Perfectly, wonderful, thought provoking poetry.  I so enjoyed the human side of this, probably because
I'm a this or that kinda gal, always second guessing myself and wondering if I left the oven on.    

Fabulous writing,  Robert Frazier~

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