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vandana
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0 posted 2008-06-08 05:26 PM




Monday (Blues)

Feeling blues
Tonight
Skies of blues
Of each feeling blues
Tonight
You are gone
Without saying I love you
Yesterday
With the smiles of happiness
Today is Monday
Having blues
Tonight
Not having a moment of love
But having a moment of sorrow
Monday (blues)
I got Monday (blues)
A blues in my notes of a song
Singing here all alone
Without you
No tomorrow
Looking for the moments
I have been searching
Feeling blues
Feeling the pain
Feeling hurt again
Tonight
Singing a song
Songs of blues
Feeling the pain
I got this feeling
Hurt my heart
Monday (blues)
I got Monday (blues)
Looking for the right moment
To come along
Monday (Blues)

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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-06-08 06:22 PM


Dear Vandana,

This is a good Blue Monday poem.  I used to get the Monday blues before I retired.  Now Monday is as great as any other day.

Love Bobby

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2 posted 2008-06-08 09:16 PM


Love hurts and I don't believe anyone who says it doesn't.
Not that the pain is constant, it's a mixed bag.
The good with the bad, the happy and sad, the laughter and tears.  
And I wouldn't trade it for anything.

Be well, vandana~

garysgirl
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3 posted 2008-06-08 10:06 PM


Hi Vandana. Those blues hurt, don't they?
This sounds almost like a blues song.
It was good to read you again, Sweetie.
Hugs and God bless,
Hugs,
Ethel
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4 posted 2008-06-09 06:15 AM


Vandanna, beautiful write from your heart. Hugs.
Prasad Nataraj
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5 posted 2008-06-09 08:17 AM


Vandana, this would make a good song. Nice write. I am feeling Monday blues already. Prasad

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Margherita
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6 posted 2008-06-09 05:39 PM


Your Monday blues comes through very intensely, dear Vandana. I hope it is fading now and you will have a better Tuesday.

Love,
Margherita

graeshine2006
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7 posted 2008-06-10 10:11 PM


This could have been my theme song for awhile... but Tuesday is coming! It was lovely and sounds like you write music too... or at least you write "musically!"
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