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Monday (Blues ) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Monday (Blues) Feeling blues Tonight Skies of blues Of each feeling blues Tonight You are gone Without saying I love you Yesterday With the smiles of happiness Today is Monday Having blues Tonight Not having a moment of love But having a moment of sorrow Monday (blues) I got Monday (blues) A blues in my notes of a song Singing here all alone Without you No tomorrow Looking for the moments I have been searching Feeling blues Feeling the pain Feeling hurt again Tonight Singing a song Songs of blues Feeling the pain I got this feeling Hurt my heart Monday (blues) I got Monday (blues) Looking for the right moment To come along Monday (Blues) |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear Vandana, This is a good Blue Monday poem. I used to get the Monday blues before I retired. Now Monday is as great as any other day. Love Bobby |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love hurts and I don't believe anyone who says it doesn't. Not that the pain is constant, it's a mixed bag. The good with the bad, the happy and sad, the laughter and tears. And I wouldn't trade it for anything. Be well, vandana~ |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Vandana. Those blues hurt, don't they? This sounds almost like a blues song. It was good to read you again, Sweetie. Hugs and God bless, Hugs, Ethel EthelsCreations Link Of Friends Powered by CGISpy.com |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Vandanna, beautiful write from your heart. Hugs. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Vandana, this would make a good song. Nice write. I am feeling Monday blues already. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your Monday blues comes through very intensely, dear Vandana. I hope it is fading now and you will have a better Tuesday. Love, Margherita  |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
This could have been my theme song for awhile... but Tuesday is coming! It was lovely and sounds like you write music too... or at least you write "musically!" |
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