Open Poetry #42 |
lady of lanterns |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady of lanterns in your copper indigo with the shimmer he has known like a drunken god accidentally I heard of your wounds when you were the she wolf and your gate was unstable like an arrow through the trees you bathed at my brim end lapping new days into your panting I was the gray water touch the still place with eternal stones you made beauty out of bow ties and strung your maiden bead jewelry you took me to a young man place and we drank of the dark root liquor I knew you then, jane doe balcom smythe III __________________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
how beautiful Mr Daark... your writings are always a highlight to my day/night love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The last line is the clincher. Do we really ever know anyone? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms r/b thanks sweet ms for your comments __________ Ms sun,no I doubt we do, but we must keep trying. Also was attracted to the many names we all carry through our lives. Thanks K-lady |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Another beauty! How do you do it? Your muse is one mighty muse! She loves you madly, as she knows you listen so well. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..she loves me with madness perhaps...but she is glass and metal and the wind...thanks lady friend |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms van |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D You write lovely. I bet she reads with a mask on a stick. A |
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