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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-06-08 06:59 AM


I know her eyes when they are amber
and she wears my metal on her nails
when she stirs her alley skin arousal
and shimmers her damp disciple endings
pressing the belly streets to my urges

with mercury metering of moments
why does mosey town wear new perfume
is she a woman more than bricks
and curves that kill her men
instead of heal them

before the dawn time, is easy here
she is the ballroom gown barefoot
and mosey is tipsy sigh sighted
as she rolls up her pants leg hem
and sweeps the night under stone pillows

never has she tasted the gypsy's rum
nor has she been the mistress of gin
but she guzzles her sailors liquor
from the frothing seam of tides
behind the rudder's wallowing windows

wearing my thunder as her nightshirt


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daark

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-06-08 07:05 AM


mmmm.... and my fragrance is Oscar de la Renta Mr Daark... lovely gifting here... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-06-08 07:11 AM


Amazing! Such poetic skill!

It felt like being on the road with you, your pen the glasses through which to behold your world as you perceive it.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2008-06-08 09:03 AM


ms r&b, thanks down under lovely one

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ms mar, thanks babe


Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-06-08 09:12 AM


Dark Stranger,

This moves along real nice.  I don't understand it, but it sounds real good.

Bobby

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2008-06-08 09:52 AM


bobbyj..

mosey town is  ventura (old town) between 2:30 am and 4am in the am..she is a lady and enjoys the sound of my harley slicing through her alleys..

you really had to be there...thanks guy

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6 posted 2008-06-08 01:16 PM


D

Ya know, maybe we had to be there - but maybe you take us there with you if we let you.  I feel you when you write.  I feel where you are and I see what you show me.

It's really wonderful what you do.

A

bel1e
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7 posted 2008-06-08 02:24 PM


~~~you are certainly...a vision master, my friend~~~~

xoxoxox

     

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2008-06-08 03:15 PM


Yo Dark Stranger,

Amazingly enough that cleared up my understanding completely.  Now I really like it.

I'll write one about the Saturday morning two a.m. drag raceing down the street on Delaware Ave.

Bobby

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9 posted 2008-06-08 04:10 PM


ms ali-san, thanks hon for the touch and the lady warm


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ms bel1e, daughterdark...you smile me so often..and you are looking so sexy in your photo.  Give my regards to my amigo too

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bobbyj, thanks guy...kinda the same thing..just a bored out harley vs a hot cage..

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10 posted 2008-06-08 05:22 PM


enjoyed
vandana
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11 posted 2008-06-08 05:22 PM




Monday (Blues)

Feeling blues
Tonight
Skies of blues
Of each feeling blues
Tonight
You are gone
Without saying I love you
Yesterday
With the smiles of happiness
Today is Monday
Having blues
Tonight
Not having a moment of love
But having a moment of sorrow
Monday (blues)
I got Monday (blues)
A blues in my notes of a song
Singing here all alone
Without you
No tomorrow
Looking for the moments
I have been searching
Feeling blues
Feeling the pain
Feeling hurt again
Tonight
Singing a song
Songs of blues
Feeling the pain
I got this feeling
Hurt my heart
Monday (blues)
I got Monday (blues)
Looking for the right moment
To come along
Monday (Blues)

vandana
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12 posted 2008-06-08 05:25 PM


oops , sorry , about poem an error!
Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2008-06-08 05:41 PM


ms vandana...now I do feel special
thanks lady

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