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Virginal Venue
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Virginal Venue |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Scent of love by Rassouli * * * Virginal Venue * * * Memory lanes wrap us in their charm, but they resound of a thousand refrains and are paved with nostalgic stones. You and I we shall transit new worlds, like celestial bodies on unknown routes we are leaving for our own virginal venue. Imagine a place where no one has yet been! No footprints nor any voices interfering. Just you and me creating ourselves anew… Wide open space, silent, bare and wanting like canvases craving the painter’s brush to be filled with life and to be given a soul. There we shall sing our matchless tune, the sound waves will impress our names to echo within the Braille reading winds. We then shall melt into rivers of delight and glide upon crystalline tears of grace, with devoted hearts and praising hands. Our seeds of love will create a new Eden. Within sacred ponds we shall mirror our eyes and gaze right into the new stars of Universe. Departure for our virginal venue is now, meeting point the soul, are you ready to join me? Then align the rhythm of your breath to mine. The pioneers’ path is glorious and divine! *** |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, the brides chanting and nature's applause here...enjoyed this lady!! |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Margherita, I just love these lines you wrote. “Wide open space, silent, bare and wanting like canvases craving the painter’s brush to be filled with life and to be given a soul.” A true artist you are. Prasad  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear Margherita, This is very good work, describing the way it should be. Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Maga Margherita la Senorita Que Bonita ~ Uniquely and gloriously splendiferous! Saved faster than you can say, "Braille reading winds". I LOVE it!  That's my kinda lovin'! Pure, deep, romantic, expansive, adoring, complete, sensuous, joining of mind, body, soul and spirit ~ in an Eden all of our own!   May you know this kind of love forevermore.   Linda Louise |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
There are those who "preach" and those who teach just by being themselves so well that others look at them and think: "I'll have what she's having!" You do maintain supreme...serenity!  Lovely! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita, You write lovely like few can. I want to go there too - and you took me there with each word that you wrote, with image that you created for my mind to savor. Lovely work. Like Karen said, "I'll have what she's having." Thank you, lovely friend. Alison |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
such a lovely write, Departure for our virginal venue is now, meeting point the soul, are you ready to join me? Then align the rhythm of your breath to mine. The pioneers’ path is glorious and divine! simply beautiful yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Magnificent write, Margharita! I agree with Karen, I'll have some of what ever you're having. Ida |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
How beautiful, Margherita!! But, my dear, I expect no less when I open up your post. You are so very, very talented!! Thank you for sharing your lovely poetry with me!! With love and hugs, Ethel Also, if you will, would you please go to my Free Links page and leave your link there? It is in alpabetical order. I haven't been promoting it and there aren't many links there. You can just click on this link below and go right to it...... EthelsCreations Link Of Friends Powered by CGISpy.com |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
heavenly visions of earthly delights |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Beautiful and delightful reading. Thank you. Joyce |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
lovely Margherita... I was captured at every word! just so beautiful... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all from my heart dear Poet friends for your loving kindness in reading and commenting. Have a wonderful week! Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
how complete can a poem be. i was wondering on the completeness of a poem. how a poem can express a subject and then round itself up. then you my friend shows here the beauty of a self indipendent poem. i love"Memory lanes wrap us in their charm, but they resound of a thousand refrains and are paved with nostalgic stones." clever talks delay friendship! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Margherita, that is just so good, I loved reading it. you done yourself proud with this lovely post. a big hug my dear. love Lindsay |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
Pouring with emotion and great talent, enjoyed a great deal!! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Wide open space, silent, bare and wanting like canvases craving the painter’s brush to be filled with life and to be given a soul." At first I chose only a phrase from this wonderful stanza. Then I read it again and realized how good the whole thing was. Nice. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You all bless me with your loving comments, dear Poet friends! Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love this one! ARCTIC WIND |
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