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A passing summer breeze
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A passing summer breeze |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Watching the streets below- People walking with such a gait as if the pavement knew how they needed to move. Automobiles passed by looking for that same destination it seems. All the time the clouds from afar wished… and the stones lacing each building wished… They too were, where they first came from. When, reminded by a passing summer breeze. That each time we follow our own wandering thoughts. Brings us closer to what we really want to see. When moments are caressed, so we can grasp why such thoughts are calling. To feel the melt- When you realized it only took a moment to notice. To bring a smile for such a thing that most don’t see. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful! I do see what you see ... you share your reflections beautifully. Love, Margherita  |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Hi Margherita, it's good to hear from you again. It's been awhile since my last visit to Pip. Thanks for the very nice and precise comment. I greatly appreciate it. Take care..... wayne |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Neat poem and one I should read a few more times! I love the last line! |
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