»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #42
»
Satisfying Surroundings
| Open Poetry #42 |
|
Satisfying Surroundings |
|
|
Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
It always seems were chasing, Chasing what we can’t have, The air that leaves us wanting more, But the money catches you, The love raises you, But I’m done chasing, I’ve learned and bruised, And I have grown… Grown into a “man”, At least someone who understands That beauty rests with accepting Who we are, what were surrounded by, And that our happiness will come with a sleek patience, With an understanding, That everyone’s happiness is different, How one person’s views serenity Can be fatally flawed to another. I still question regardless, My imperfections are perfections, And I don’t claim to be higher than anyone else. I merely rinse my hands and smile in the mirror. |
||
| © Copyright 2008 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved | |||
Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I loved the last line. Being able to look in the mirror and like what you see is a true accomplishment. Joyce |
||
|
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's right, we had better like what we see in the mirror or we're in big trouble. I liked your poem very much, you did a great job here. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
