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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-06-07 07:04 AM

yesterday was in perhaps shoes
like the easy side of under trees
and you took your afternoon
like a sipping whiskey nap times

we were royal in our want to be
you were elegant in that side of you
that stays behind those eyes often
when you keep the unlock elsewhere

our driver was a bit darker than noon
but he brought light to your eyes
when the little girl of your woman
read christmas in our journey

and made the young man of me smile
______________

daark

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2008-06-07 06:54 PM

~smooooth, dark daddy...smoooth~

xox

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-06-08 06:41 AM

we were royal in our want to be
you were elegant in that side of you
that stays behind those eyes often
when you keep the unlock elsewhere

mmmm... Mr Daark... you write so well..

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2008-06-08 06:45 AM

ms bel1e, thanks little one for the touch on daddy's mind

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ms r&b, thanks babe for the soft smile of you

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-06-08 06:58 AM

quote:
when the little girl of your woman
read christmas in our journey

and made the young man of me smile

Sparkling poetic gift, dear D.! A wondrous journey you are on.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2008-06-08 06:59 AM

ms mar, thanks babe for your lovely touch

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2008-06-08 01:04 PM

D

I read and smiled - and smiled some more from the sheer beauty of your poetry. I smiled for the way I feel as I read it. I smiled as I realized that I believe all who read your words feel as if you are speaking to that one person. You are intimate in how you reach out. Does that make sense? Hell, I don't care. That is how I see it.

grins

A

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2008-06-08 01:22 PM

I could feel your smile ~ and it brought on my own.

EA

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2008-06-08 05:05 PM

ms ali-san thank you hon for your words, you are a special lady with your touches

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ms EA, your smile is priceless thanks babe

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2008-06-08 09:37 PM

our driver was a bit darker than noon
but he brought light to your eyes

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I know I'm supposed to be typing a reply, talk about getting myself boxed in.
Forgive me, I'm having a moment at the moment.
suffice to say, you're too much,(in a good way) and that2.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2008-06-08 09:39 PM

ms bluezy, glad you enjoyed the view from here..thanks babe

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