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Seeking Stability
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GreenDragon Junior Member
since 2008-06-05
Posts 10USA |
Seeking Stability Masticating calmness fills your stall A step here and there carefully aware The bulk of your meat covered in black walnut Satin hide laced with veins My fingers gather grey sweat oil Stroking under your mane You turn to look Temples flexing with your jaw And those big simple eyes blink Never asking what’s wrong with mine Just, “Thanks for these oats Love.” |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Dragon, enjoyed you horsing around with you pen here. I was playing with your work and savoring it in little bites, pausing my thoughts to look back at what I just read...here is what I saw.. Seeking Stability Masticating calmness fills your stall A step here and there carefully aware The bulk of your meat covered in black walnut Satin hide laced with veins My fingers gather grey sweat oil Stroking under your mane You turn to look Temples flexing with your jaw And those big simple eyes blink Never asking what’s wrong with mine Just, “Thanks for these oats Love.” |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear GreenDragon, This is a good poem about a horse. I like horses too. Bobby |
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