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graeshine2006
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since 2008-06-03
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The Prairie Lands, USA

0 posted 2008-06-05 10:36 PM


I’m waiting.
I look for you
In places you aren’t.
Will we know right away?
I have an idea of what you are,
But no image.
You are kind and simple.
You are goofy and fun.
You talk and appreciate and work hard and laugh.
And when we look at each other, no words are needed.
We know.
Our arguments may get fierce.
Our days may get dull.
But we know it’s just part of our journey.
Are you hiding from me?
You make me hopeful
Waiting for the touch I haven’t felt.
This is for you…. wherever you are,
I can’t wait for us to meet.
I’m ready, are you?

© Copyright 2008 Debra Grae - All Rights Reserved
Lincoln
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since 2007-12-03
Posts 62
Earth
1 posted 2008-06-05 11:41 PM


enjoyed.. Linc

"Be thou the rainbow in the storms of life. The evening beam that smiles the clouds away, and tints tomorrow with prophetic ray." -- Lord Byron

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2008-06-06 03:08 AM


Enjoyed!  May you find him (and he, you)!

- Owl

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
3 posted 2008-06-06 03:23 AM


A very questioning poem. Nice write. Prasad

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2008-06-06 05:48 AM


ms shine..it is fun to watch anticipation on one's lips..cool write
Ray Sharpe
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 112
Tenerife
5 posted 2008-06-06 06:50 AM


What a wonderful philosophy....I hope you meet soon
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2008-06-06 09:06 AM


You are kind and simple.
You are goofy and fun.
You talk and appreciate and work hard and laugh.
And when we look at each other, no words are needed.

~*~

Within all of this, is where the magic is born.




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