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Open Poetry #42

Thursday’s Wine

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-06-05 05:29 PM

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Somehow
It seems the thing
To do

Now
The rooms
Are quiet warm
Dark and still

On the roads outside
The morning cars
Are wading through
Another storm

So much
That passes as memory
Are only nostalgic fantasies
Vintaged over time

The rain in streams
So distilled and crystalline
Running down the pane

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-06-05 07:50 PM

John,

I think that's true for good and bad memories.

Bobby

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2008-06-05 08:09 PM

I am especially fond of:

"So much
That passes as memory
Are only nostalgic fantasies
Vintaged over time"

...that about 'sums it up' for me....
[about all I have left]

applause for this 'penning!'

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2008-06-05 08:24 PM

"The rain in streams
So distilled and crystalline
Running down the pane"
Nice 3D imagery, John.

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