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Lost Love . . . . (with Music and Voice Recording)
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Lost Love . . . . (with Music and Voice Recording) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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Lost Love Please Click Link above to hear music and my voice recording. Music: “The Foggy Dew” by Bruce Mitchell From the album entitled: Celtic Destiny  Artist: Gabriel Rossetti Lost Love by Linda L. Dowd As specks of gold glittered in an ebony sky, I dreamed of my lost love who bade me good-bye. On the emerald shore of a fair lowlands loch, While baaing white woollies, around us did flock. The heather did sway in the earthy, spring breeze. And the day had been one of both harmony and ease. As we lay among flowers, I soon saw in his eyes, A far-away look ~ to my chagrin and surprise. His demeanor had changed, in what seemed but an instant. He became cool and aloof ~ and ever so distant. I queried the reason and he then did impart, That another fair lassie had captured his heart. It felt as tho’ nor’winds had sucked out my soul. I was shattered inside and feared losing control. But somehow I knew that I’d forever be fine, For the spirit within me would continue to shine. In lieu of protesting and pounding his chest, I proclaimed that our parting wouldst be for the best. ‘Twas he who then showed his utter surprise, As he saw the strength in my steady, green eyes. I turned and bestowed him a sweet buss on the cheek. He appeared rather puzzled and suddenly meek. I bade him farewell, as I rose from the grass, Saying, “May you be happy with your new bonnie lass.” I strode ‘cross the heather with my head held high, Which belied the sadness and tears I did cry. As I stifled the rise of a wailing banshee, The sun broke thru’ clouds and shone upon me. As specks of gold glittered in an ebony sky, I dreamed of my lost love who bade me good-bye. On the emerald shore of a fair lowlands loch, While baaing white woollies around us did flock. ~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Well, that was very sweet and smart of you. I hope his "bonnie new lass" gained 300 lbs. and grew a wart on her nose and another right where you kissed him. Just having a little fun. Ida |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Aw sisters are we...our native Ireland fair..lets hope he stumps his toe and rolls down one of those hills landing in sheep doo-doo! LOL Romantic poem....I am just in one of my moods... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Chuckle, chuckle. I guess us Pisces ladies don't take rejection very well. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Ida ~ Love your spunk, my sister Celtic colleen! My Irish eyes are laughing and my bonnie head be nodding in agreement!  Love and Irish blessings to you, my friend! Linda xo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ARH ~ You are delightful when you are in one of those "moods"! Yes, I do believe that scenario that you so comically described, would be a cad's just desserts! lol Hugs 'n Irish blessings, EA  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ida, dear Ida ~ Nor do we Leos!  Loves 'n laughs, Linda xo |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
She saw him weeks later but all was not well "Oh what is the matter my dear effjayel?" Ole effie just turned without even a peep Then went down the hill to make love to his sheep Serves the bugger right, I say! Sorry Linda, this was a beautiful write, but I couldn't resist. Where ya hidin' Johnny boy? Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My dear rascallion, Steve! Love your wit and charm, you little rascal! You got a chuckle or two out of me this morning! Effie's done up 'n left me! ~ and I don't know wheres ta find 'im! Loves 'n laughs ~ and a big hug and smile, Linda |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
No big loss Linda, I heard the sheep kicked him out too. Keep up with the lovely writing. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
The great Mr. Yeats must surely be smiling upon the hearing of this ballad of the heart and soul! I loved every second spent in the sight and sound of it all! Art |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
"Twas he who then showed his utter surprise, As he saw the strength in my steady, green eyes" - This is my favorite part! Yes, us Pisces tend to be emotional, but then find the strength somewhere! Can I think about this and change it to "my blue eyes"?????? I may not be Irish - but I can certainly get my ire up when need be  eally enjoyed this! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Steve ~ You got me 'laffen' again! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
gilead ~ Thank you VERY much, Art-istic One!  I'm pleased that you were able to hear the audio as well ~ and that you enjoyed it! Loving hug and a smile, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
graeshine ~ I don't have green eyes, either! Mine are blue like yours! lol Mind you, I am of Irish and Scottish descent with a bit of Swiss thrown in for good measure! lol Thanks for dropping by and leaving such a sweet reply! EA |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
Nothing much to say than that of the others, but would like to comment on your beautiful work. Very inspiring!!! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Much enjoyed, especially your Earth Angel spirit in doing the right thing and then the strong thing! - Owl |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Earth Angel, being a guy, I shouldn’t say this; however I did enjoy the poem. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear Linda, This seems to be the season for lost love at pip. This is very fine writing. Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
K.K. ~ Agreeing with the other responses is A.O.KK with me! ~ and I thank you muchly! ~ and I am pleased that you found it inspiring.EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Owl the Wise One ~ Greetings, Dear Diana! It's my spunky spirit that keeps me from stumbling, mumbling, and crumbling at times! Love to you, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Prasad ~ Well, I'm certainly am appreciative that you DID say it! ~ and thank you! I like a man who expresses how he truly feels! lol Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Bobby ~ "Fine writing" ~ Thanks! I like that! I'm just doing what I love to do and I'm thankful that my writing is well-received! Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Oh, Linda dear, you caught that awful moment so well and I love your reaction, Lioness! Now, aren't we Pisces girls supposed to be compassionate and loving?  I had such fun also with the replies!I second your attitude, Angelo terrestre! We stand tall, even when we hurt! Love and hugs. Margherita    |
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