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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA 
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Balance Lonely but laughing Broken but beaming Reeling but righteous Frightened but faithful Threadbare but thriving Grieving but grounded Hidden yet hoping Witnessed as woman Lifetime of learning Focus on future Starting this second Ending an era Believing in balance |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The alliteration of this poem speaks volumes; the heart of you speaks to me. I know this hurt; Yet I hurt this much... Your poetry will take you very far... for you speak from the woman of you; and I would not dare tell you differently.  |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
hi Grashine......" Suffering is not good for the soul unless it teaches you how to not suffer. That is its purpose.” Seth Welcome to Pip!! |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Wonderful balance of words. Hope your sufferings come to an end. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
A wonderful example of balance in every way possible! You have learnt well how to handle suffering and how to come through it. I am sure you will meet more suffering in your life, but when you do, remember this time, read your and your aunt's poetry about it, talk to your aunt and your friend, God, about it, and you will come through it and see the sunshine and green grass again. - Owl |
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