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poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

0 posted 2008-06-03 12:17 PM

The four musicians in a field
(to Alison and the band)
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A note has touched the cloud, just now.
A bird has stopped over thinking
it may find another of its kind.
Silvers of the sweat drops on the
musician’s forehead glisten.
The open field of a spring fare
is being fiddled with the bow
of nature. Yes, they know how to flow.
Devine music. The four of them.
A group on the act. Four persons,
four sets of lives with ups and downs,
love and languishment, bodies and
problems. Yet in a group they are one.
The music personified.

A note touches the cloud. It blushes
an evening. A drop of water.
Someone says that it looks like rain.
They look at each other and with
smiles on the faces, pick up
a new song for the drops.

clever talks delay friendship!

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2008-06-03 04:39 PM

Hello puddarku, it is a very nice poem and I enjoyed the musical ending, it always enjoyable to read you.

yann

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-06-03 05:31 PM

Enjoyed...James

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

3 posted 2008-06-04 02:14 AM

Very well written, the flows of words surely are like musical notes.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-06-04 06:52 PM

quote:
A note touches the cloud. It blushes
an evening. A drop of water.
Someone says that it looks like rain.
They look at each other and with
smiles on the faces, pick up
a new song for the drops.

A true delight, dear Ku! Music expands through your words and on its way to the clouds it touches the heart too ...

Very captivating.

Love and joy.
Margherita

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2008-06-04 10:19 PM

I've read this one a few times.

It's more than good, it's...music!

But then, you are one of those guaranteed "always-good" poets here at Pip.

Lovely.

graeshine2006
Member

since 2008-06-03

Posts 368
The Prairie Lands, USA

6 posted 2008-06-04 10:30 PM

Very nice.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2008-06-04 11:42 PM

very very beautiful my friend Ku...

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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