Sleepin' on Simone's Couch

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Open Poetry #42

Sleepin' on Simone's Couch

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-06-04 07:47 PM

Sleepin' on Simone's Couch

I've never felt so alone
as when I was with Simone.
She'd invite me over for
some cognac in the still
of the night, light up a
few candles and then turn
out her lights, then she'd
run her hands up and down
my body until she found the
part she liked, and she'd
French kiss me while she
held me, and that part
did feel kind of nice.
Then she's fall asleep
beside me and thats where
I would feel all alone,
spending another night
sleeping on the couch
of sleepy headed Simone.

JamesLee
02June
2008

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-06-04 10:16 PM

Yo James,

Loved it, it made me laugh. I'd stay away from sleepy girls. Perhaps she was working too hard during the day.

Bobby

graeshine2006
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since 2008-06-03

Posts 368
The Prairie Lands, USA

2 posted 2008-06-04 10:24 PM

I wasn't sure if I was supposed to laugh or be sad! Too much cognac maybe???

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

3 posted 2008-06-05 03:45 AM

Really funny and also makes me feel sad, nice write.

Ray Sharpe
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since 2008-05-29

Posts 112
Tenerife

4 posted 2008-06-05 06:36 AM

James Thats great ....like everyone else ....I din´t know whether to laugh or cry.........I have actually been in this situation ....and didn´t know then either!

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2008-06-05 12:06 PM

Maybe you should have gone out dancing first. Started the blood pumping a little.

Ida

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2008-06-05 07:19 PM

Thank you Robert, graeshine, Prased, Ray and Marchmadness...I tried to write this with humor, was also trying to share the thoughts you feel when in an empty relationship that is based more on vises than love...the name and experience were made up, not my experience, just my thoughts..James

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