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Open Poetry #42
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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-06-04 06:53 PM

    Tempests Passing

glower-grey clouds
in a restless-tear
sky…

plaintive poet-hearts
  resonate
with the pure sound
and fresh smell of
cool rain pouring
  down
through spectral
  mists rising…

embrace the moment!
© Copyright 2008 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2008-06-04 07:06 PM

I love those moments very much and I love your poem too, dear Bruce. Enjoying every moment, yes.

Just beautiful.

Love,
Margherita
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Gaia
2 posted 2008-06-04 07:31 PM

I am especially fond of the 'sprectral mists rising' image!
Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2008-06-04 10:20 PM

Secondhanddreampoet,

Nice poem.  I've been out in those.  I feel a cold coming on.

Bobby
graeshine2006
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4 posted 2008-06-04 10:26 PM

Nothing gets me likes poems that mentions smell... hmmm, I'm smelling rain right now - oh yeah, we're getting a downpour!
Marchmadness
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5 posted 2008-06-05 01:48 AM

This is a lovely gift for the poets heart.
                                    Ida
ArtSolstice
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6 posted 2008-06-06 02:47 PM

You conjure those images recalled here so well. Those skies heavy, the smells and sounds. Sensations perfectly captured.
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7 posted 2008-06-08 01:30 PM

Bruce,

Thank you for taking me there.  To the lovely of your mind.

A
2islander2
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8 posted 2008-06-08 02:07 PM

Hi Bruce, I will re use the words of Margharita,

  just beautiful and thank you for the poets

      yann
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