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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. By now I should know My way around This neighborhood Pretty well It must be cold There are winter coats In evidence though as yet I see no snow upon the roads Before dawn comes And the rational mind Once again regains control A silent house With wooden eaves You standing at the door . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You paint your scenes so well and bring emotions! Just beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you for the rescue . . . John . |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful! The cold and the pain seeps into my bones. - Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
The longing in this poem makes me sad but it is (as always) an excellent write. Ida |
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