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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2008-06-04 06:31 AM





enchanted


You make me so mad,
that I can't think straight,
so mad i can't see,

Two as stubborn as an ox,
both heads together,
just nonsense and funny,

Why is it you?,
only you that gets me,
my feathers all riled up,

You, you, you!!!
why I could just scream,
choke you sometimes,

Smack you upside the head,
to make you realize,
to make you understand me,

I get so hot, boiling,
steaming mad,
the words you say,

How you say them to me,
so mean, hateful,
stubborn...

When it is all said and done,
We make up, laugh,
and love even more,

because we both are stubborn...

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-04-2008 07:52 AM).]

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Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
1 posted 2008-06-04 09:57 AM


Being stubborn in a nice way sometimes is good. Very stubborn (romantic) poem indeed.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Ray Sharpe
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 112
Tenerife
2 posted 2008-06-04 10:25 AM


some people do seem to fight and love in equal measure....I like your controlled rage in this one ......you ,you ,you.........says so much !
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2008-06-04 06:03 PM


I am stubborn...lol..hardheaded woman! lol

I wrote this after watching the Disney movie.."Enchanted"

The scene they come to realize they both are in love, is where an arguement begins,
both after argueing go to different rooms to sleep, and sit and ponder on the feelings of what just happened....magic!

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-06-12 07:27 PM


I love that movie!



ARCTIC WIND

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