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Open Poetry #42
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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058
0 posted 2008-06-03 08:56 PM

unnecessary redemption
fortuitous fabrication
leaving us manic
in bipolar beatitudes

covering us with castigations
of precipitous palpitations
heart, rending like missives
in a midnight mass

illusive evolution
changing caveats of creative
concern, irrespective of care
loosing the mind from mentality

making clear the confusion
of delicate diatribes
designed to enlighten
…the redeemed
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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-06-03 11:13 PM

Steavenr,

I'm afraid this is way over my head.  I don't understand it at all.

Bobby
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-06-04 06:07 PM

This is very interesting, dear Steaven. Enlightenment is when we can accept black and white, dark and light and know that we are loved and cared for ALWAYS. Love contains the gift of acceptance of all ways.
No redemption needed, indeed.

Love,
Margherita

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