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wearing of storms (forbidden love)
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wearing of storms (forbidden love) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you have seen through my nudity there is no armor but there are swords and eyes of steel but never stolen glances from old woods forests shadows with warm water behind the deep kind of well that reads your soul but I am wade able for your limbs my pen is not mighty when you are fragile my mind is not jaunty with laughter but I do bring back your bottle with a note without promise offering only all of my nothing _________________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How deep your well... how true your gifts. Beyond that, I'm bereft of words. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
good to see that you are well, darkie~~~and writing~ xoxox ~babygirL |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dark Stranger, I don't quite understand this. However, it seems nice and kindly. It also sound good. Bobby |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D I understand and this is beautiful. You are vulnerable like all the people I like the most. Your writing is one of the windows into your soul - this is what makes it so wonderful to me. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks babe for looking through this one ________________ ms bel1e, thanks dark daughter, so nice to see you back here _________________ bobbyj, thanks guy..I appreciate your reads ___________________ ms ali-san, thanks hon for the touch to the images here |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
This is one of those poems that I wish I knew from where it came! Very nice. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Gshine'. Welcome to the pipbluemeadow of sounds. Thank you for the read, and I also wish I knew that answer. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your pen is always mighty, dear POET! This is overwhelmingly and intensely moving in its beauty. Love, Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
just wonderful Mr Daark... love RDB x Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, humble thanks lady friend ______________ ms r&b, thanks babe from down under |
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