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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2008-05-31 05:49 PM


Tree house

Here is where I long to be,
cool night breeze blowing,
moon in bright glow, glowing,

Peace, serenity, calm,
wishing upon the stars,
making one special, ours.

Hear the bullfrogs croaking,
the crickets chirping,
different animals lurking,

Smell the fresh rain on trees,
forest flowers full of sweetness,
we live together in oneness.

As the night closes in,
I lay my head down in the forest deep,
I close my eyes and go to sleep,


ANOTHER ROOM INSIDE THE TREEHOUSE
© Copyright 2008 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2008-05-31 06:39 PM


And who wouldn't want to be here?
                         Ida

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2008-06-02 09:39 PM


How peaceful!

ARCTIC WIND

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
3 posted 2008-06-03 02:53 AM


Very artistic poem and the description of the scenery are wonderful.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Ray Sharpe
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 112
Tenerife
4 posted 2008-06-03 03:08 AM


You truely have a romantic heart....lovely
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2008-06-04 07:59 PM


Yummm...wouldn't mind a little time there myself...James
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