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For Whom the Light Shines
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For Whom the Light Shines |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA 
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She stood there in the moonlight. I had to stop to see, and so did the moon, and the stars, and the breeze that touched her hair, and the yellow darkness, even the wholeness of the night! The light shines upon the harlot and, As well, shines on me for whatever I am . . . [This message has been edited by gilead (06-02-2008 05:06 PM).] |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
I keep coming back to Walt Whitman's enduring line--- ". . . for every atom that belongs to me, as well belongs to you." Art |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You convey the feeling of oneness stunningly well, dear Art! This is definitely a little gem. Love, Margherita  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Art, This is top of the line as far as I'm concerned. I like it a lot. Bobby |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Ray Sharpe Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 112Tenerife |
your world draws us in ...I love this ......I keep reading it and seeing a different meaning |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I like this a lot, Art, It provides much food for thought. Ida |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Nice poem, small and sweet. |
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