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Come Away With Me...
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Come Away With Me... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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 Come away with me, as we sit by the cozy campfire, telling our ghost stories, Roasting marshmallows and franks, singing and gazing at the stars, a lovely moonlit night, You and I sitting on a log, huddled together staying warm, as you say something funny, I am amazed by you, wanting you, I stare at your gentle eyes, leaning in to kiss you.  Right at that moment, a coon pops up, stealing our franks, You laugh, I laugh, but the kiss means even more, so I wait with anticipation, we could live here, you and I, build our treehouse, just us and nature. I can be Snow White, you can be my Prince Charming, only modern day, We can close out the world, live here in the mountains, dreaming our dreams together. Come, lets go camping....  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
You have elegantly captured the "two becoming one" phenomenon that only exists where love is allowed to grow and flourish --beautiful write |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Brought back a few memories...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Nice Pics ARH! ARCTIC WIND |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
In this busy city life, something one should really consider. Nice poem. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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