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Ray Sharpe
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since 2008-05-29

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Tenerife

0 posted 2008-06-02 02:03 PM

for anyone who has ever stood "under the clock" clutching a rose......
Will she come?   I do hope so

Will she run?    I just don’t know?

Will she fly?   I’ll search the sky

Will she drive?  My dreams arrive?

Will she sigh?    pass me by?

Will she cry?     cloud the air?

Will she smile?  allay my fear?

Will my heart still beat the drum?

With all my will I hope she comes.

© Copyright 2008 Ray Sharpe - All Rights Reserved

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1 posted 2008-06-02 02:13 PM

I sure do hope she came to meet you!!
Enjoyed.
Hugs,
Ethel

leoni_v
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2 posted 2008-06-02 02:53 PM

Awww, such a poignant poem! I'm lucky to be on the other side in this situation

gilead
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3 posted 2008-06-02 04:37 PM

Ah, very nice, Ray. I feel the power of longing and doubt. Such is the way of love!

Art

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4 posted 2008-06-02 06:38 PM

enjoyed

Ray Sharpe
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5 posted 2008-06-02 06:42 PM

Thank you all you are all very kind to a new boy ....mmmm yes leoni ....I bet you didn´t know we men stood there fretting so !

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