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Open Poetry #42

Warped and Twisted

SummaTyme
Junior Member

since 2008-05-31

Posts 13
GA

0 posted 2008-06-01 10:49 PM

Warped and Twisted

Harsh winds and violent blows
hidden secrets nobody knows
eyes are wide and hands are fisted
Deep inside I'm warped and twisted.
So many tricks and so many lies,
Too many whens and too many whys
Nobodys special nobodys gifted
But me, I'm warped and twisted.
Sleeping awake choking on a dream
listening to a silent scream
call my mind, but wait the numbers unlisted
lost in someone so warped and twisted.
On my knees alive but dead
look at the invisible blood i bled
I'm not gone but I'm warped and twisted.
Burnt out, wasted, emptied, and hollowed
todays just yesterdays tomorrow
the suns died out, the ashes sifted
I'm still here, warped and twisted

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2008-06-02 12:34 PM

Wow, very moving and powerful!

Welcome to PIP!

~ARH

SummaTyme
Junior Member

since 2008-05-31

Posts 13
GA

2 posted 2008-06-02 01:43 AM

Thank you this one is actually old I wrote this when I was about 15

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2008-06-02 02:29 AM

Pretty heavy poem for 15. I hope things are better for you now.
Ida

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2008-06-03 08:19 PM

interesting, clever write...love this:

"Sleeping awake choking on a dream
listening to a silent scream"

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2008-06-03 09:00 PM

SummaTyme,

The words and thoughts are there. It just needs a little more polish.

Bobby

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2008-06-05 10:19 AM

Hi, there! Love your username! ~ Summa Tyme!

I read in your reply that you wrote this when you were only 15! Wow! Powerful penning! Life can be so confusing at that age. You have a considerable talent!

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,

Earth Angel

graeshine2006
Member

since 2008-06-03

Posts 368
The Prairie Lands, USA

7 posted 2008-06-05 09:44 PM

WOW - amazing.

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