Open Poetry #42 |
Angelo's Bed |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Felix, enslaved in foster care, was made to cut down a large wild cherry tree. With his chainsaw, he was forced to cut it into boards. It was hard, torturous work. He was made to stack those boards carefully. Three years later, when the wood had cured, and after his foster Dad had died, he spirited those boards away, and hid them in a dry place only he knew about. Another two years later, he returned, stole those cured cherry boards away, took them home, and carved his Angelo a bed frame. He sanded, and polished that frame with melted beeswax. He made a tight rope and cotton stuffed mattress for the bed. Angelo always slept sound in that bed. It held the sweet smell of the beeswax. Bobby |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Bobby you have a wonderful imagination. Keep it up. Lindsay |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love the smell of beeswax! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks LindsayP, This one is largly true. I'm pleased you are enjoying the stories. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Passing shadows, Yes, natural beeswax does smell good. The wax from Tulip Poplar honey is probably the best for smell. Love Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
If must have been very rewarding to create something for your son with your own hands. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, Yes, it was loads of fun too. I like wook working. Thanks for the kind words on this poem. Love Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Now this was a good use of the cherry wood, especially if it was left abandoned there ... I'm sure Angelo felt the love you had put into making that bed for him. All things emanate energy and this made for nice dreams no doubt. Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Bobby, another warm poem from you, enjoyed very much and have been a little hypnotized while the reading. Thank you yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, Yes, angelo enjoyed his bed very much. Wood plays a major part in everyones world. Everything from houses, to books. It is our one, renewable, natural resource. All that is required is sun light, water, and air. Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
'Tis no wonder why Angelo slept like a babe in the bed that love built. This was a 'honey' of a story. Linda |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, I'm very pleased if this one worked for you. I don't know how I missed reading your post. Thanks for your kind words. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Linda, I'm pleased it worked for you. This is one of the true ones. Love Bobby |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
There is a love and devotion here that borders on the extraordinary; the "understatement" in the last two lines explode with meaning that words can't describe. This is magnificent writing, Bobby! Art |
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Ray Sharpe Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 112Tenerife |
I love your stories of angelo....the love shines through |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Art, I'm very pleased this one worked for you. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Ray, For the kind words on this one. I'm pleased it worked for you. Bobby |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dera Vandana, I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. Bobby |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Felix's experiences have given him many personalities. This was his endearing side. Joyce |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Joyce, Like every human being, no matter whom, Felix is a very complex individual. Love Bobby |
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