Open Poetry #42 |
Tones |
D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Tones Of Inflective Deflective Reflective Retroreflective Poetry Tones Morning songbird pitched tones ‘n vibrating leaves Warbler ring echoes painted tones in highlighted hues Human flesh elasticity, tones radiating musical blues Warmth walking nature’s resilient recitative muse. Inflective Line of time traversing inflective roads winding heights Soaring mind spreading wings gravitating inflective sight Current flowing brainwave inflections shouting voice’s bite Babe of a inflective soul, minor turned adult changed light-year. Deflective Silken sheen of mirrored reflections of a deflective stone Rippling deflective rings spheres in greater meditative tones Wind chimed breezes channeling deflective breezeways alone Spirit gravitating deflective memories, sigh sharpened hone. Reflective Images reflective light dancing shadows dark silhouettes Musical mood paths ‘n tragedy trails in reflective stage duets Word play among reflective imagery moving featurette Characters between white ‘n black spectrum - Romeo ‘n Juliet. Retroflective Looking glass - not of searing futures - but retroflective pasts Wrinkled age weathering retroflective storm aftermath blasts What if, should not have sorrow retroflectives in sad contrasts Like a Katrina tear haunting retroflective graves - half masted. Poetry The HeArt of living HeArtBeats dancing Poetry’s rhythm Blues mixing jazz adding rap’s deep down feel Poetry rhyme Gospel verse to God Bless America, Poetry’s Artmosphere hymn Harmony ‘n melody of tones of inflective - deflective – Reflective - retroreflective - Poetry never terminated in time. Where Poetry is banned ‘n censored backwards into silent films Home Sweet Home of Grimm’s reaper writing amputated limbs.) David L. Young05/15/08© De-Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
complex, intriguing write...nicely done |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
steavenr thank you for your post. |
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kanashe Member
since 2008-05-21
Posts 59america |
i wish i could write like that. this was beautifully written. i loved your word choices!! -ASHE- |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Thank you for your post kanashe, you can write like this and better, just keep writing away. |
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